It's been
a crazy couple of weeks at Grover! With NJASK testing for all three grades
levels, we have been following a modified schedule for two weeks.
The week
before testing began, we were able to make significant progress with the
research-based argumentative essay for Model Congress. Students completed their
"t-charts", organizing the main supporting and opposing ideas for
their thesis statements. As research continued in Social Studies, students
began actually planning the essay in IRLA. We tweaked our thesis statements;
selected the main idea for each body paragraph (based on the arguments we
accumulated with the t-chart), using a "simple format" outline; and
began to organize our research into the appropriate paragraphs, using an
"extended format" outline. We reviewed all the components of an essay
and the parts of each paragraph (including the introduction, rebuttal body
paragraph, each supporting body paragraph, and the conclusion). As students
outlined, we also reviewed how to create internal parenthetical citations based
on the full citations created on NoodleTools. We discussed the importance of
including in-text citations--which refer readers back to full citations on the
bibliography--with all paraphrased and directly quoted support.
We also
reviewed the difference between paraphrased and directly quoted support, and we
discussed when and why a writer may include each type. Students practiced
paraphrasing research using a set of steps and strategies provided to them.
Finally, on Friday, students actually drafted the essay by hand, using all of
the planning materials from class (t-chart, simple outline, and extended
outline).
During
7th grade testing week, students had time in the computer lab to type their
first drafts. On the Friday after testing, students brought in a completed
typed first draft, and we began the revision process. We reviewed the rubric for
the assignment (available on my website), and students began critically
questioning their own writing using a checklist with a series of questions
designed to make students think about how well each paragraph fulfills its
intended purpose. This revision checklist-- created from the rubric-- also
required the students to consider the overall effect of the essay and its
persuasive power/relevance in today's world.
During
6th grade testing week, we were "displaced" from our classrooms until
11am each day. During this time, the 7th grade watched a series of movies
connected to the Social Studies curriculum. Teams 7G and 7S also used this time
to continue working on the Model Congress essay. Students met in their
committees for the first time, reading each other's essays, comparing research,
and making a plan for further individual revision work needed. This was a good
opportunity for students to evaluate their arguments and support based on other
students who researched the same topic. In their committees, students also
began to plan the bill they will eventually write together. We reviewed the
parts of a bill, and committees identified the problem they need to solve with
the possible solutions their bill will include.
In the
afternoon, when students had IRLA, we continued our individual revision work,
focusing on topic and concluding sentences. We worked on making sure our
concluding sentences connected back to the thesis statement without sounding
too repetitive. Students continued to use the revision checklist to critically
analyze their own writing.
On
Friday, students brought in a revised 2nd draft. After the Wordly Wise test
(units 17 and 18), students began editing their essays. Students received an
editing strategy list, reviewing all the grammar concepts we have covered so
far this year. Final drafts are coming in this week, and committee work will
continue. As we move closer to live debate in our mock congress sessions, I hope
the energy and student engagement levels will continue to rise. I'm looking
forward to getting back to our normal routine and normal schedule now that
testing is finally over!









